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    • CommentAuthorTempting
    • CommentTimeFeb 13th 2015
    Help out please
    • CommentAuthorFaith
    • CommentTimeFeb 17th 2015
    What kind of tips are you looking for? Can you please at least list some of things that you need? Think about how you can cross a River or a creek. Let's say the side you're on is "A" and the other side is "B". What would you do to reach side "B" ? You build a bridge and what other stuff that you need..the supporters/equipments that necessary for the bridge in order for you to cross the river. List your needs and student might chip in their knowledge about good essay. God bless you on your paper!@
    • CommentAuthorFaith
    • CommentTimeFeb 19th 2015 edited
    Tempting, just so you know that a Thesis Statement is always in the introduction of the paper which is the first paragraph of your essay. Now, keep in mind that you can start your Thesis Statement at the beginning of your introduction or you can place it at the end of your introduction. Thesis Statement can sometimes be in a form of a question, otherwise just statement. Some simple examples to help your Thesis Statement clear; your Thesis Statement must be consists of fact or something that you believe. After you stated your Thesis you give the reason why you is true, what makes you believe the author is right, how do you know that the author is right or your statement is true? You have to support your Thesis statement in order for your audience to understand and convince them to believe that you are right about what you write. I hope am helping if not you can always ask your instructors to help you that's what they are for. They are there to help the student. My problem when I was there was thinking that I know all that and I do not need to see them or seek their advice. There are good instructor out there who are willing to help you. Do not be afraid to ask question be bold and don't think your ideas and thoughts are not good as the others. You have to believe in yourself and mostly be humble(Humility). What I mean by that is humble yourself in whatever you do. Sometime we thought we can only be humble by showing in action. Well, that's true, but you also need to look inside of you and ask yourself. Am I humble enough to obey what my mind ask me to do?. Alright I think this is too long already go head and start your essay and use those techniques. I hope it helps! peace.
    • CommentAuthorTempting
    • CommentTimeFeb 20th 2015
    Thank you, ever since High school, I was in a program called College Prep Program (C.P.P), the instructors were Peace-corps. And from what I learned from them, they said your Thesis Statement can be in the Introduction and also the last sentence on your fourth paragraph.
    • CommentAuthorTempting
    • CommentTimeFeb 20th 2015
    For the record, you are really helping me. I appreciate it.
    • CommentAuthorlover
    • CommentTimeSep 3rd 2015
    im one of the student ure talking about
    • CommentAuthorTwister
    • CommentTimeOct 13th 2015
    search, log, read, type... nd don't bother knowing whos lookin at u, sitting next 2 u, what time is it, what to do next, until its finish....thats a college it would be better writing it after class..
    • CommentAuthorlover
    • CommentTimeOct 14th 2015
    thank you twister